Comments on: POS (personal outer space) EDIT

By: Allison

Allison — Wed, 01 Aug 2007 20:25:22 +0000

agreed, a little intimacy never hurt anyone. good job with the collaboration everyone! Bill, I am totally siked (is that really how you spell siked?)about this show. Let me know if there is some sort of specific way you want me to get my prints framed??? matte no matte, pine frame, black, white? thick thin? I want your input.

By: Emma

Emma — Sun, 29 Jul 2007 08:50:14 +0000

DING INTIMACEY!!!

By: Ben

Ben — Sat, 28 Jul 2007 16:01:29 +0000

ding!

By: Evan

Evan — Sat, 28 Jul 2007 15:52:20 +0000

scratch that last comment, its intimate.

By: Evan

Evan — Sat, 28 Jul 2007 15:51:54 +0000

you dont think its a little too sparse with only the red lines?
also, id have to see it printed, but it looks like the green might be a little too faint, we might have to beef it up in width or in color.

By: patrick

patrick — Sat, 28 Jul 2007 03:04:43 +0000

Bill I submitted my idea for a postcard/entry for the show. K THX BYE!

By: pthompso

pthompso — Sat, 28 Jul 2007 02:07:16 +0000

I was really attracted to the first one at first. It’s interactive!. But as I look at them again, I think the third one is a really smart, sharp design. It’s true that you don’t have to literally draw out the space, and the second one is boldly open and brutishly empty at the top, but the way that the dotted lines work in the third one (they are all derived from the text, but there is symmetry coming from outer space and asymmetry coming from personal) is very clever. I vote that you just go with number three.

By: Evan

Evan — Sat, 28 Jul 2007 01:35:26 +0000

dude, i can totally rock that out before monday. i got like a ton of other projects going on right now, why not another to pass the time?

By: Bill

Bill — Fri, 27 Jul 2007 21:57:54 +0000

And it’s totally okay, don’t worry about it. She advised against it, but it’s our show, and I’m curating it. I think the exhibition would benefit from your piece because it actually creates a new space to experience. If anyone has any problems they’ll just have to deal!

By: Bill

Bill — Fri, 27 Jul 2007 21:55:31 +0000

Yeah!

By: Emma

Emma — Fri, 27 Jul 2007 20:55:50 +0000

p.s. are we still sneaking me into the show? i’m totally into that, dude.

By: Bill

Bill — Fri, 27 Jul 2007 20:41:25 +0000

The thing is, I need to get this order out by Monday the latest. If anyone wants the Illustrator file to work from, just let me know and I can email it to you or put it on the shambot server.

By: Evan

Evan — Fri, 27 Jul 2007 18:23:53 +0000

i do like the third one. it doesnt hit you over the head with it, but it is more than type. i really think we should all try to do some sweet graphics and maybe pick or combine the best ones. LETS COLABORATE PEOPLE

By: Emma

Emma — Fri, 27 Jul 2007 17:50:23 +0000

I know you always say that a dotted line makes everything better…. so maybe the third one?

Really, though, I like all of them! I think it just depends on how you want people to view the postcard, maybe? Like, the second one conveys the message more simply, but the first one makes nice use of the actual space of the postcard. I DON’T KNOW! hm.

By: Bill Ferenc

Bill Ferenc — Fri, 27 Jul 2007 17:33:48 +0000

I like the way the first one works too because you can read ‘personal space’ if you flip it. It makes some awkward areas in the corners though.