Sorry to double post, but I’m just now realizing that I’d better get my ass in gear on the production of my latest movie opus. To start, I’m posting the script here in hopes of getting some good feedback before I finalize anything. I got some good feedback from class, but not the best. That’s where you guys come in! The only thing I’m sure of changing is the second montage of Robot living homeless on the streets. Also, I’m thinking that Robot’s new place is actually across the hall from Dave, and they keep missing each other Science of Sleep style. Also, the beginning argument needs work. A lot of work. Right now, it’s really one sided, and I’d really like for it to be a lot more back and forth between Robot and Dave to justify Dave’s anger a little more. Tim? Sam? If you have time, that is, could you re-write it for me?
Anyway, here’s the actual script:

Robot Fight!

Let me know what you think!